Short ghost story I'm writing

[michaelmyerslives07]

Im writing a new short ghost story and would love some feedback on it, but does anyone know any sites i could put it on? I would especially like your guys feed back, coming from true horror fans you can tell me whats scary and offer me constructive criticisms which i think i really need. But as i said i need a site to put it on so you guys can read it. Thanks a bunch, MML.

[TheLurkingFear]

Originally Posted by michaelmyerslives07

Im writing a new short ghost story and would love some feedback on it, but does anyone know any sites i could put it on? I would especially like your guys feed back, coming from true horror fans you can tell me whats scary and offer me constructive criticisms which i think i really need. But as i said i need a site to put it on so you guys can read it. Thanks a bunch, MML.

Good to hear you're writing. did a fair bit of it myself when I was the same age as yourself but not so much now. Look forward to having a read.

[michaelmyerslives07]

Haha, in which case i will hurry up and get it fineshed. Writings harder than i remember it being :D

[Miss Italy]

Hi there

Great to hear that you're writing. I would love to read it. I was recently published myself last year in a horror anthology

As for websites you can post it on I will do some research and let you know. Have you heard of Spinetinglers??

[TheLurkingFear]

Originally Posted by Miss Italy

Hi there

Great to hear that you're writing. I would love to read it. I was recently published myself last year in a horror anthology

As for websites you can post it on I will do some research and let you know. Have you heard of Spinetinglers??

I never did get round to reading your story miss Italy! so many distractions of late. How's things? Still writing I hope

[Miss Italy]

Originally Posted by TheLurkingFear

I never did get round to reading your story miss Italy! so many distractions of late. How's things? Still writing I hope

Hi LF

I would still really like you to read some of my work. I will send you a PM with one of my pieces

I have unfortunately been too busy to write lately but have a couple of weeks off work so hope to get started back again.

I hope all is well with you? Been watching any good films lately?

[TheLurkingFear]

Originally Posted by Miss Italy

Hi LF

I would still really like you to read some of my work. I will send you a PM with one of my pieces

I have unfortunately been too busy to write lately but have a couple of weeks off work so hope to get started back again.

I hope all is well with you? Been watching any good films lately?

That'd be fantastic Miss Italy!

I watched Black Swan last night. Finally.

[michaelmyerslives07]

What did you think? I loved Black Swan!

[TheLurkingFear]

Originally Posted by michaelmyerslives07

What did you think? I loved Black Swan!

Yeah I liked it. The little passages of her transformation into swan worked very well I thought, and the performances were good all round.

[TheLurkingFear]

Originally Posted by TheLurkingFear

Yeah I liked it. The little passages of her transformation into swan worked very well I thought, and the performances were good all round.

The scenes in which we see Portman turning into swan put me in mind of Cronenberg's the Fly movie, with Brundle taking off his fingernails as he slowly deteriorates. In fact Black Swan feels very Cronenberg, which is always good.